Free Application and Essay Evaluation

This is a free offer--for real. If you email us your basic stats (see below) a draft of any one of the 400-word 2009 Entry HBS essays (we recommend Mistake or Engage With a Community], we will give you an evaluation of the essay's effectiveness, subject matter, tone, and impact --and also your chances of getting in.

PLEASE NOTE: THIS IS AN OFFER FOR APPLICANTS WHO HAVE NOT ALREADY APPLIED. IF YOU HAVE APPLIED AND GOT DINGED OR NOT INTERVIEWED YET, YOU WANT A DING REPORT OF YOUR ENTIRE APP.

Just e-mail us a draft of any one of the following current 400-word 2009 HBS application essays:

• What have you learned from a mistake? (recommended)
• What would you like the MBA Admissions Board to know about your undergraduate academic experience?
• Discuss how you have engaged with a community or organization. (recommended)
• What area of the world are you most curious about and why?
• What is your career vision and why is this choice meaningful to you?

and we will send you back, pretty fast, a free critique.

Instructions:

Just paste your draft of the essay [DO NOT ATTACH] to us at sandy413@yahoo.com and we will e-mail you back--usually quite quickly (altho a little slower near deadlines so do this early)--a personalized appraisal that (i) addresses the issues raised in your essay; and (ii) lets you know where you stand in the essay writing process.

To take advantage of the free offer:

1. Paste [do not attach!!!] your draft answer of any ONE HBS400-word essay into an e-mail and send to us at sandy413@yahoo.com
2. Include the text of the question.
3. Include (i) your name, (ii) first choice school (if not HBS), (iii) a brief work and education background [in 40 words, name companies, titles, schools], (iv) GMAT score, (v) AGE and gender, (vi) have you ever applied to B schools before and what outcomes, (vii) anything special about your extra-curriculars, accomplishments, etc. (viii) and please tell us the search engine or other way you heard about Cambridge Essay Service.

That's it, honest. No salesman will call, you will get back some sharp and quick comments about your essay and your chances.

Please paste your essay in to an e-mail, do not attach it as a separate document.

Now take the QUIZ:

Free Consult

If you'd like to talk to us first, just call (617) 354-2242. No voice mail hell. A live person will answer the phone and talk to you about what business school you should apply to, what strategy to use, and what your chances of admission are. But an even better way is to send us an email first which outlines: age, work history, test scores, gender, application history [have you ever applied, what happened], any powerful extras, and what schools you are thinking about, you can also attach a resume.

HONEST DISCLOSURE: WE ARE VERY TALKY FROM MARCH TO AUGUST AND LESS SO IN SEPT-JAN, AS DEADLINES APPROACH. SO IF YOU WANT TO HAVE A RELAXING CONVERSATION, TRY CALLING BEFORE SEPTEMBER.

If you have a draft essay, you can read it over the phone and get immediate feed-back. For free. How come? We like to talk to business school candidates, exchange information, and give you an honest appraisal of your chances for admission to a top business school.